Blaze At St Johns Church

LI: Write a detailed description that paints a picture in our readers mind. On Wednesday 8th of February at 5:30 pm, the St Johns Church caught on fire. The charcoal smoke were coming in to the sky. That was a terrible fire. The lovely St Johns Church was burned by the serious fire. The fire fighters was saying that fire started by an electrical problem. The people was watching and crying because of the church. The fire was very angry and the colours of the flames were red, orange and yellow like a grapefruit. The black smoke is very dangerous and some one could die if they breath it! The fire is also dangerous. The Colm fire fighters was sparing water on the fire. The fire was 1,000 degrees! Glass exploded and furniture crackling in the church. I wonder if you can burn the chicken on that fire. The fire trucks came and started spraying water on the fire. The people was watching them working and crying. After the fire St Johns church was looking disgusting and scary. The community now feels sad and angry. The church has fallen down and it looks creepy. I feel sad about it too. Some of the people feel as sad as I. The community is going to make decisions what to do with the church. Maybe they are going to try to build a new church or build a house? The end. By: Gleb